Mass haiku
Too many words, too many words..... an editor once told me. And I know what he means.
Haikus fascinate me with their brevity, and disciplined 5/7/5 three line, two part, construction. So as it's Sunday I thought I would write a haiku about Leonard Bernstein's Mass as a literary alternative to mangling something from the Bach 48 on the piano. I'm going down this overgrown path with considerable trepidation as I know there are some talented librettists and composers among my readers. But hey, you can only improve on this modest effort can't you?
Mass was Lenny's way
of doing radical chic -
just a Simple Song
Please add your Mass haikus in particular, or musical haikus in general using the comments feature at the bottom of this post. I'll try to put a post together sometime with the results if it grabs people.
Normal service will be resumed tomorrow morning with too many words, too many words........
If you enjoyed this post take an overgrown path to Being and nothingness
Haikus fascinate me with their brevity, and disciplined 5/7/5 three line, two part, construction. So as it's Sunday I thought I would write a haiku about Leonard Bernstein's Mass as a literary alternative to mangling something from the Bach 48 on the piano. I'm going down this overgrown path with considerable trepidation as I know there are some talented librettists and composers among my readers. But hey, you can only improve on this modest effort can't you?
Mass was Lenny's way
of doing radical chic -
just a Simple Song
Please add your Mass haikus in particular, or musical haikus in general using the comments feature at the bottom of this post. I'll try to put a post together sometime with the results if it grabs people.
Normal service will be resumed tomorrow morning with too many words, too many words........
If you enjoyed this post take an overgrown path to Being and nothingness
Comments
Not my own work, but thanks to
Ashley Frieze for this one which seems kind of appropriate about Mass.....
My admiration
makes my own feeble efforts
seem barely worthwhile
it's said for pictures
and is it true for music?
mightier than words